Blk 426 #06-338
Jurong West Ave 1
Singapore 640426
Email: chngjunwen88@hotmail.com
Home No.: 65631931
Handphone No.: 92980287
9th September 2011
Ms Phoebe Tan
HR Manager
Inecom Pte Ltd
12 Tannery Road
01-05 HB Centre
Singapore 347722
Dear Ms Tan,
I am writing to apply for the position as a technical consultant as recently advertised on www.inecom.com.sg/careers.aspx. I believe that my combination of technical skills, analytical skills and customer service skill would serve Inecom well in this position.
During my school holiday, I have worked and learned about the SAP system, starting from the basic stage like data entry in SAP, to advance stage like creation of view in SQL server. Hence, I am able to understand and analyze what end users encounter. I am comfortable with structuring of codes in query, XL reporter, crystal report and view in SQL server, which I believe is essential in developing applications to enhance your user experience.
On a more general level, I am able to communicate well with your customers. I trust that you would find me to be confident, passionate and well-spoken, the type of consultant whom your customers will rely. In additional, I have been a facilitator and technical support for a project on SAP implementation in Malaysia, decreasing the setting up duration by 50%. Throughout my experience working with SAP, I have been striving to learn more about the SAP system. It is a privilege if I am given a chance to work in depth in the SAP system with professional teammates in your company.
I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my credentials and experience. Inecom’s mission to provide world class business software solution is a passionate goal for me. I would be interested in speaking with you to discuss the values and experience to enhance the customers satisfactory. I can be reached in confidence at one of the above telephone numbers.
Thank you.
Yours Sincerely,
Chng Jun Wen
Hey!
ReplyDeleteFor the first paragraph, maybe it can be summarized into "technical, analytical, and customer service skills".
Paragraph 2, the "Hence, I am able to understand..." this section seems to kill the fluency of the paragraph. It isolates the last part, so maybe it would be good to restructure it?
Whereas in regards to the general layout of the application letter, my opinion of it would be to restructure the parts. Experiences and technical skills of the SAP could be combined into one section. Then follow by customer service experience and skills into another. This would give the letter some kind of sequence instead of jumbled up feel?
Hi Jun Wen,
ReplyDeletei share the same sentiments with Jon with regards to the layout of the application letter. Perhaps it could be better to structure up your letter better, so that it can be for easier reading!
However, I would like to point out that the format was apt! Good job!
cheers,
cal
hey Jun Wen,
ReplyDeleteLooks like you're really good at the technical skills you're saying. haha, don't really know the programs or software you're talking about.
But hey, when i read your letter, it seems that you are addressing Ms Phoebe Tan directly instead of the company. E.g
"I am comfortable with structuring of codes in query, XL reporter, crystal report and view in SQL server, which I believe is essential in developing applications to enhance your user experience."
Your user experience? Maybe you should say the company's user experience. What your skills have should benefit the company, well, at least not address it directly to her. Unless she's the boss of the company of course.
That's all i guess.